Score: 10

"Wow!"

submission: Sketched - Therapy

date: December 10, 2009

Im pretty impressed, you guys! I remember when this came out a long time ago, and now you have a featured series!

good job!

Score: 10

"Holy shit."

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep.8

date: October 10, 2009

How did you completely eliminate the frame rate issues?

I don't remember any of your other smbz episodes being this clear, lag-free, and perfectly timed.

Dude I'm impressed by everything there isn't one bad thing about this. whoever wrote this did an amazing job too, but what really got me was the creative things you did with the fighting.

In my opinion this is the best so far, so keep up the amazing work alvin!

Score: 10

"Wow"

submission: Crotchless Chaps

date: August 15, 2009

this is the funniest flash ive seen in a long time!! i loved it! dude i was wondering if any of the characters were voiced by the same person and god damn every one was voiced by you!

i loved this flash man, this is the reason i come to newgrounds, not to see shitty sprite flashes or stupid video game parodies, but to see funny, original flashes.

kudos x 2 to you my friend. hope to see more from you! or maybe even just do a collab or something! ill leave it up to you, if your ever open to listen to some audio or scripts or something ill make em short so i dont waste too much of your time if u dont like em!

if u ever need any help that doesn't include animating (cause thats whats kept me from submitting flashes) like ideas, writing scripts, or voice acting then hit me up man! invitation is always open

Score: 9

"it was.. a good effort"

submission: LoL: Oh Yes And Spiders

date: August 15, 2009

9/10 for the amount of effort. cause u must of worked on this a lonng time.

but i hated the voice acting. the only good one was the sprite fairy thingy. everyone else seemed like thye just read the line from the script, rather than.. voice a character doing the line. sprite lady did a REALLY good job though.

and it seemed like half the characters sounded like, depressed or something.. like they were talking quietly so they wouldnt wake their parents while they were recording. like, i cant say this without me coming across as an asshole but im going to say it anyway.. all the characters sound like nerds and there are definite characters here but its just written, not shown with their voices. maybe im just really picky with voice acting cause i enjoy creating characters myself so much and i make sure they have good voices.. i dont know, but either way, im sure some people agree with me the voice acting could use some work.

plus i jsut realized, its cause they are sprites that im not liking the voice acting, the voice acting's not BAD but with this kind of flash u have to make the voice actors bring out the characters with ONLY their voice, and the well written script.

also, there were lots of typos.

so, in the future flashes, make the audio shine and be funny and not be cheesy and do all these things WITHOUT the animation. cause once u do that, and add animation, it will shine greatly.

i hope u take all this criticism constructively, and hope you dont think im an asshole cause i just say these things to try to help

Score: 10

"wow"

submission: DARE

date: August 15, 2009

i almost cried.. really wanted to

it definitely moved me.. good job man i loved it!

cause thats pretty much the stage im at in my life right now newly graduated from highschool

Score: 8

"it was good"

submission: Bonehead: The Cereal Box

date: August 8, 2009

i definitely liked it, it was creative and unique..

but i had 2 problems with it..

1- You need to work on executing your jokes better, with timing and everything.. i mean most were done great, but a few i was like "uhh that didnt seem like it came out the way he pictured it in his head..'

example- when he told the audience to shut up it seemed like the joke has either been used before or maybe its my next criticism that made it not work for me.. and so heres my next thing

2- voice acting. both voices sounded, exactly the same, the entire time. like there was no fluctuation in the voices to me, almost like talking in monotone (i know you weren't obviously, but that should give u a bigger of idea of what im trying to say about the voice acting)

other than that, it was really good! especially for a first flash! i cant wait to see more from you and see you grow into a great flash artist here on newgrounds!

so, 8/10 from me. 2 points off for the 2 problems i had with itjavascript:submission_controller.Ge tReviewController().SaveReview();

hope you take this criticism well cause im not trying to be a dick im just saying it how it is.. and how u can improve on it.

cant wait to see more of these : )

Score: 2

"horrible"

submission: Guns of the Awesome

date: July 3, 2009

it would of been amazing if every other joke wasnt already DONE in egoraptors flashes. and even egoraptors flashes arent that good

like you did a good job, just next time dont use other peoples jokes

Score: 10

"hmm elite spammer"

submission: A Norse in the 9th Ward

date: June 22, 2009

would vampires going on a killing spree against black people be bad too? what if they were white nordic honkey n***a vampires that killed... well.. slaves..

point is, its funny. everything should be ok or nothin should have the right to be.

10/10 5/5 cause animation has its own crappy style, written well i guess, and voice acting was funny.. oh, and cause marc m is my hero..

p.s.- IT WAS SO UNREALISTIC THE VIKING WOULD OF RAPED AND PILLAGED THE SLAVES NOT ASK THEM FOR DIRECTIONS!! AND HE'D PILLAGE THE TRADING HOUSE TOO HES A VIKING OMG OMG OMG RANT RANT RABBLE!!

p.s.s.- i wonder if i broke any rules with this.. i dont think so

Score: 10

"ahahahha"

submission: FRED - Animated Series

date: June 13, 2009

fred is annoying, that was a nice short flash!

good animating and sounds man!

oh on another note, chris would u be interested in doin a short collab with me and my buddy? im gonna try to have the audio ready by next weekend cause thats the only time i can record it with him.. we wrote the script it would be about a minute and a half long so not too much.. i can send you the script if you want, its about 2 pages long so shouldnt take too long. but yeah, NOOOO rush on it just wondering if ud be interested : D cause i know you can make it shine

Score: 10

"the most impressive part"

submission: Music Is An Epic Thing

date: June 3, 2009

was the 3d plane, i wish i knew how to do that!

10/10 5/5 man, music wasnt yours but who cares you still made a pretty cool video. im still impressed by that damn plane haha did you make that yourself or did u use like a premade model?